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Why we read poetry
It's National Poetry Month! Why do we read (or NOT read) poems? Please respond on the discussion page: Also, watch the screencast on Billy Collins’s “Introduction to Poetry.”
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Poetry Sharing
Choose a poem by your assigned poet to analyze. Annotate a copy of it. Share one thing you admire about the poem. Example: I love how Tom Wayman's "Did I Miss Anything?" takes a common question posed by a student who has missed class and uses it to explore with sly philosophical wit how much and how little is going on in any given situation we experience.
I asked my mother and she told me that the visual aspect of the project is really well done but there’s a lot more detail I can add. I can elaborate deeper on some of the analysis and Influences.
ReplyDeleteI asked my mom and she said to move a text box to another slide because it was confusing.
ReplyDeleteI asked my friend and they said to add a few pictures to tie the whole presentation together.
ReplyDeleteMy mom told me to analyze the poem more in the beginning.
ReplyDeleteMy mother told be to make it more colorful.
ReplyDeleteMy mom told me to add more pictures and color
ReplyDeleteMy parents said to add more pictures to make the slides more interesting.
ReplyDeleteA friend of mine gave me advice to make my thesis statement more specific and relevant to the poem.
ReplyDeleteA friend gave me the feedback to explain more of the poem’s references and add a slide summarizing and tying everything together at the end
ReplyDeleteI asked my friend for an advice. He said I need more pictures.
ReplyDeleteI asked my parents and they said to add more visual elements to it
ReplyDeleteI got feedback telling me to make sure my thesis ties everything together, and connects to the world.
ReplyDeleteI asked a friend, who pointed out something confusing I had in my analysis.
ReplyDeleteMy mom said to highlight the rhyme scheme in a different color than what I used to highlight my other annotations so that the pattern is more clear.
ReplyDeleteI was told by my mom to make it more clear what lines I was analyzing.
ReplyDeleteMy parents said that I should clear up pieces of my biography because some of it was confusing.
ReplyDeleteI asked my brother and he said to make sure every slide had color or a picture so that the presentation would be more interesting visually.
ReplyDeleteMy friend said to add more images to make the presentation more interesting visually
ReplyDeleteMy mom said to go a little bit deeper into the poem background info.
ReplyDeleteI was told to fix up a little bit of grammar in my biography slides.
ReplyDeleteMy sister told me to go into more depth into the anylisis slides
ReplyDeleteI got feedback to add more images and color.
ReplyDeletemy brother told me it looked boring so I added pictures to every slide, not just the title slide.
ReplyDeleteA friend of mine recommended that I use more images to tie my slides together.
ReplyDeletea friend of mine told me told it needs more color, so I added color to the background.
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